Шешімі: IT Careers and Modern Life
Құжат тапсырмағаИнструкция к заданиям по ағылшын тіліне
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Выберите только ОДНО из двух предложенных заданий (38.1 или 38.2), укажите его номер в БЛАНКЕ ОТВЕТОВ № 2 и выполните согласно данному плану.
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Choose ONE of the following projects and write an opinion essay based on the plan. Project 38.1: Imagine that you are doing a project on why an IT career is very popular among Zetland teenagers. You have found some data on the subject — the results of an opinion poll. Comment on the data and give your opinion on the subject of the project. Project 38.2: Imagine that you are doing a project on what gifts Zetland teenagers would like to receive for their birthdays. You have found some data on the subject — the results of an opinion poll shown in a pie chart. Comment on the data and give your opinion on the subject of the project. In both projects, select and report 2–3 facts, make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments, outline a problem and suggest a way of solving it, and conclude by giving and explaining your opinion. The pie chart shows the following results: a laptop — 25%, a smartphone — 24%, headphones — 23%, a camera — 20%, and a gift certificate — 8%.
Шешім по шагам
5 қадамВыбираем проект 38.1 и во вступлении обозначаем тему: популярность карьеры в IT среди подростков Zetland.
Отбираем ключевые данные: хорошая зарплата — 33%, много вакансий — 25%, удалённая работа — 20%. Отмечаем, что хорошая зарплата значительно важнее постоянного развития, которое выбрали только 8% респондентов.
Формулируем проблему: IT-работа может привести к длительному сидению за компьютером, стрессу и недостатку живого общения. В качестве решения предлагаем соблюдать баланс между работой и отдыхом, делать перерывы и общаться с коллегами лично.
В заключении объясняем, что IT важно для современного мира, поскольку цифровые технологии используются почти во всех сферах жизни, однако специалистам необходимо заботиться о здоровье и личном общении.
Пишем связный текст объёмом от 200 до 250 слов и используем логические связки: firstly, moreover, however, therefore, in my opinion.
Пример ответа для проекта 38.1: Nowadays, information technology is one of the most rapidly developing spheres, and many teenagers are considering an IT career. I have analysed the results of an opinion poll among Zetland teenagers to find out why this career is so popular.
According to the data, the main reason is a good salary, mentioned by 33% of the respondents. The second most popular answer is the large number of vacancies, chosen by 25% of teenagers. In addition, 20% appreciate the possibility of working from home. It is worth noting that these practical advantages are much more important to the respondents than creative work and constant professional development, which account for 14% and 8% respectively. In my view, this may mean that teenagers are primarily concerned about financial security.
However, some IT jobs can cause health problems because employees spend long hours sitting in front of a computer. They may also feel isolated when working remotely. To solve this problem, companies should provide regular breaks, ergonomic workplaces and opportunities for face-to-face communication. Employees should also exercise and plan their working day carefully.
To sum up, I believe that IT plays a crucial role in the modern world. It helps people communicate, study and work more efficiently. Although an IT career can be demanding, its advantages make it a very attractive choice for young people.
Бұл жауап талдау нәтижесінде алынды, бірақ банктің ресми кілтімен тексерілген жоқ — проверьте выкладки, прежде чем заучивать результат.
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Выбор и одновременное раскрытие обоих проектов вместо бір.
Перечисление данных без сравнений и комментариев.
Отсутствие проблемы и конкретного способа её шешімдер.
Выход за пределы объёма 200–250 слов.
Слишком общее заключение без объяснения личного мнения.