Ответ: Shopping and Online Buying
Many people enjoy shopping because it helps them relax and find something interesting. Some people also like shopping because they can spend time with their friends. I usually go shopping with my best friend because we have similar tastes. We can give each other useful advice and have fun together. I like shopping for clothes, books and presents. However, I dislike shopping for shoes because it often takes a lot of time to find the right pair. As for online shopping, I think it is very convenient. People can compare prices and buy things without leaving home. On the other hand, sometimes the quality of a product is worse than expected. That is why I use online shops, but I prefer buying important things in ordinary stores.
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You are going to give a talk about shopping. Explain why many people enjoy shopping, who you like shopping with and why, what you like and dislike shopping for, and what your attitude to online shopping is. Speak continuously for 10–12 sentences.
Где здесь ошибаются
Раскрыт не каждый из четырёх пунктов задания.
Вместо связного монолога приведены отдельные короткие фразы без логических переходов.
В ответе меньше 10 или больше 12 предложений.
Не выражено собственное отношение к онлайн-шопингу.
Использовано слишком много повторов слова shopping.