Шешімі: School Clubs Email
You have received an email message from your English-speaking pen-friend Ben. He has just joined his school Drama club, where students give performances in English and French. Write a message to Ben and answer his questions about what you like most about your school, what school clubs you have, and whether you have joined any of them and why.
Write 100–120 words. Remember the rules of email writing.
Шешім по шагам
4 қадамНачните письмо с обращения к другу и благодарности за его сообщение.
Последовательно ответьте на три вопроса: назовите любимую сторону школьной жизни, перечислите школьные клубы и укажите, в каком клубе вы состоите и почему.
Добавьте встречный сұрақ о Drama club Ben и завершите письмо неофициальной формулой и подписью.
Проверьте грамматику, связность текста и количество слов: от 100 до 120.
Dear Ben,
Thanks for your email. It was interesting to hear about your Drama club. What I like most about my school is the friendly atmosphere. Our teachers are helpful, and my classmates are always ready to support each other. We have several clubs, including a sports club, a photography club and a school choir. I have joined the photography club because I enjoy taking pictures and learning new ways to edit them. We sometimes organize exhibitions for students and parents. I think it is a great opportunity to develop my creativity. What plays are you going to perform with your club? Do you enjoy acting in foreign languages?
Best wishes,
Alex
Бұл жауап талдау нәтижесінде алынды, бірақ банктің ресми кілтімен тексерілген жоқ — проверьте выкладки, прежде чем заучивать результат.
Где здесь ошибаются
Не отвечены все три вопроса из письма Ben.
Отсутствуют обращение, завершающая фраза или қолтаңба.
Объём письма меньше 100 или больше 120 слов.
Используется слишком официальный стиль общения.
Ответы на вопросы перечислены бессвязно или нарушена логика письма.