Ответ: Talk About Your School
I would like to tell you about my school. My typical school day starts at half past seven, when I get up and have breakfast. I usually have six or seven lessons, including English, mathematics and history. After classes I often do my homework in the library or attend a sports club. I think English and computer science are the most useful subjects for my future. English will help me communicate with people from other countries, while computer science may be important for my future career. After I leave school, I am going to enter a university and study information technology. I hope to find an interesting job in this field. School life can sometimes be difficult because we have a lot of homework and tests. However, I enjoy spending time with my classmates and taking part in school events. All in all, I have a positive attitude to school because it prepares me for adult life.
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You are going to give a talk about your school. You will have to start in 1.5 minutes and speak for not more than 2 minutes. Mention your typical school day, the subjects you find most useful for your future and why, what you are going to do when you leave school, and your attitude to school life. Speak continuously.
Где здесь ошибаются
Не раскрыты все четыре пункта плана.
Вместо связного монолога приведены отдельные короткие фразы.
Нет объяснения, почему выбранные предметы полезны для будущего.
Нарушено требование объёма: меньше 10 или больше 12 предложений.
Используется слишком много повторов и отсутствуют связующие слова.