Ответ: Zetland Teenagers Project
A coherent English essay of 200–250 words on either task 38.1 or task 38.2, following all five points of the plan.
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Документ к заданиюИнструкция к заданиям 38.1 и 38.2 по английскому языку
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Выберите только ОДНО из двух предложенных заданий (38.1 или 38.2), укажите его номер в БЛАНКЕ ОТВЕТОВ № 2 и выполните согласно данному плану.
В ответе на задание 38 числительные пишите цифрами.
Choose only one of the two tasks below. Imagine that you are doing a project on young Zetlanders and the environment. You have found some data on the subject — the results of a survey conducted among Zetland teenagers. Comment on the survey data and give your opinion on the subject of the project.
Alternatively, imagine that you are doing a project on Zetland teenagers and summer jobs. You have found some data on the subject — the results of a survey conducted among Zetland teenagers. Comment on the survey data and give your opinion on the subject of the project. The survey question is: “Why do you want to take a summer job?” The results are: earning pocket money — 35%, becoming more independent — 30%, learning new skills — 22%, meeting new friends — 7%, helping parents — 6%.
Write 200–250 words. Use the following plan: make an opening statement on the subject of the project; select and report 2–3 facts; make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments; outline a problem that one can face when participating in environmental projects or taking a summer job and suggest a way of solving it; conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the importance of environmental education at school or on whether it is important for every teenager to do a summer job.

For the first task, use the survey data in the table. For the second task, use the percentages given in the text.
Где здесь ошибаются
Writing about both topics instead of choosing one.
Failing to report numerical data from the selected survey.
Giving comparisons without comments.
Omitting the problem-and-solution paragraph.
Writing fewer than 200 or more than 250 words.