Решение: Opinion Essay on Education
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Выберите только ОДНО из двух предложенных высказываний (40.1 или 40.2), укажите его номер в БЛАНКЕ ОТВЕТОВ № 2 и выразите своё мнение по предложенной проблеме согласно данному плану.
Choose one of the two statements in the provided material and comment on it. Express your opinion and support it with arguments according to the given plan.
Write 200–250 words. Follow the plan: introduce the problem; express your personal opinion and give 2–3 reasons; present an opposing opinion and give 1–2 reasons for it; explain why you disagree with the opposing opinion; conclude by restating your position.
Решение по шагам
6 шаговChoose one statement. A suitable option is the statement that a computer cannot replace a teacher.
Paraphrase the problem in the introduction and state your position: technology is useful in education, but it cannot completely replace a human teacher.
Support the opinion with arguments: a teacher understands students' emotions, adapts explanations to individual needs and develops communication and social skills.
Present an opposing view: computers provide quick access to information and can make lessons convenient and interactive.
Refute this view by explaining that digital tools lack human empathy, judgement and the ability to respond flexibly to complex personal situations.
Conclude by restating that computers should assist teachers rather than replace them.
A coherent English opinion essay of 200–250 words choosing one statement and following all six points of the plan.
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Где здесь ошибаются
Discussing both statements instead of choosing only one.
Writing fewer than 200 or more than 250 words.
Giving reasons without presenting or refuting an opposing opinion.
Failing to divide the essay into logically connected paragraphs.
Using informal language or repeating the statement without paraphrasing it.